История изменений
Исправление Nxx, (текущая версия) :
Попросил написать текст на английском с заменой всех иностранных слов нативными. Вот что вышло:
The foresitter of the joined folkdom stood at the speechstick and greeted all the folk. He told about the folkdom’s new plans to make more food for the poor, give more learning to the little ones, and find new ways to heal sick folk. He said the folkdom would work hard to keep peace between all folk and help other folkdoms in need. At the end, he asked the folk to look after each other and strengthen the bonds between them. He hoped all would use their gifts of thought, speech and inwork to care for the folkdom and for all folk. The folk clapped and cheered after his wordlaying. It would take much inwork and willpower to fulfill these hopes, but all felt joy at the foresitter’s uplifting message.
Приятно удивило, что он придумал заменить microphone на speechstick (речепалка). Это же надо знать не только назначение микрофона, но и его форму понимать!
Исходная версия Nxx, :
Попросил написать текст на английском с заменой всех иностранных слов нативными. Вот что вышло:
The foresitter of the joined folkdom stood at the speechstick and greeted all the folk. He told about the folkdom’s new plans to make more food for the poor, give more learning to the little ones, and find new ways to heal sick folk. He said the folkdom would work hard to keep peace between all folk and help other folkdoms in need. At the end, he asked the folk to look after each other and strengthen the bonds between them. He hoped all would use their gifts of thought, speech and inwork to care for the folkdom and for all folk. The folk clapped and cheered after his wordlaying. It would take much inwork and willpower to fulfill these hopes, but all felt joy at the foresitter’s uplifting message.
Приятно удивило, что от придумал заменить microphone на speechstick (речепалка). Это же надо знать не только назначение микрофона, но и его форму понимать!